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Free verse № 21452

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Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

Where do I begin and end in space She wondered as she flew into the night And heard it calling her name in the country I was with her then Once again she heard the silent voice telling her to stop you're going to far Nonetheless she felt no concious fear Breathing soft to God as in the instant of release. Under a wide and starry sky dig me a grave and let me die. Where do I begin and end in space when you've seen her face you can believe in natural law Hiding in every place she'll tell you why the sky is blue. Down to the sea she is singing and no man on earth can be hid from her dreaming.

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[n/a] god'swife 21-Oct-02/8:52 AM Reply
Silent voices cannot be heard. I couldn't read any further after that.
[n/a] Frass › god'swife 21-Oct-02/1:33 PM Reply
I like some of this poem--makes me want to reread it; and, GW, if you'd stuck with it, she mentions your husband.
[2] Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/9:52 AM Reply
Hee hee, silent voices... That's even funnier than my bird with lips.
[0] zodiac 18-Mar-04/8:05 PM Reply
Here's another red bar - probably old news. (http://www.alwaysontherun.net/kendra.htm#e)