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living room

by elmundo

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 May 2002 · 3 comments

three floors up notion divine breathing shallow , not yet dead. solitary child football companion, a moment in time. burning down the house, why think this. sunday what a day.keyboard nightmare limitation, drowned in wine, no hope with this.salsa master closed on desert linen, merchants caravan towering pass, draped on couches' back. one is joined, all is air, all is air...no more thoughts.

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3 comments

[7] anonymous 19-May-02/10:51 AM Reply
well you know what to do..

will this be reborn with brighter wings???
[n/a] razorgrin 15-Jul-02/1:54 PM Reply
blah.
[1] Shardik 10-Oct-03/5:45 PM Reply
Sounds more like the pantry.