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Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku

by loneshadow29

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

life like a candle its flame always burning bright got any water?

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5 comments

[5] Tintagiles 25-Oct-02/9:17 AM Reply
Amusing.
[8] INTRANSIT 25-Oct-02/4:23 PM Reply
You gotta let go of that negative energy sometime ,dude. Nice haiku though
[8] New Life Drug 25-Oct-02/5:18 PM Reply
haha that's awesome
[4] horus8 26-Oct-02/8:39 AM Reply
(cherry spoons first attempt at attempting)life like a sandal/the soles protecting your feet/wish i were a snail?
[5] hipster flare 13-Mar-03/9:45 AM Reply
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.