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Dispersion (Free verse) by timfowler
Fall away, retreat: laughing,
across the tatooed landscape
scattering like fireflies
after the moment of thunder,
singular splendour of the instant
Sundered, washed away -
we recall a crystal or two
of joyful forgetting:
a dozen places and poses
once ours: now the past's possession.
You feel it? A part of us gone,
left in a glass, by a quiet table;
under a seat on a train.
So we are constructed -
block upon block, and pulled apart
strand by strand.
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Weighted score: 4.8172355
Overall Rank: 10949
Posted: May 20, 2002 2:29 AM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2002 2:29 AM PDT
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