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Free verse № 22582

My Life

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Oct 2002 · 0 comments

The story of my life is a tradgity but true. I moved around alot but what else could I do. My dad in the army, my mom dead and gone. I traveled the world like a soldger, my life gone wrong. New house, new town, and new place to sleep. In two more minutes i'll be six feel deep. Tell my dad that I loved him and the others too, and mom i will be with you soon. I'm dieing fast, there's no more to say. I'll sit down the knife because I can't stay.

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