Some Suburban Clarity

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 May 2002 · 3 comments

Before this kiss, doused in high bliss, Can twist our passion'd minds together, Or our eyes can close, love-lifted, By rose-hot desires... Let's be clear on the semantics. That Forever is a very, very long time, That Marriage is a legally binding contract, And that Love is a word invented by philosophers and used by fools.

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[9] jfackf 12-Jul-02/11:41 PM Reply

I love the twist! Enough sappiness, eh?

[7] *Lyrisick* 2-Sep-02/1:56 AM Reply

Cathes me off guard, but leaves my illuminated

[8] blueyes 28-Dec-03/10:20 AM Reply

WOW! I really liked this. I love the way you set this up. It seems to me to be very effective in that it feels like a movement between two people. Very well done!