poemranker ::untitled2 by ThreeFourSix

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Free verse № 22647

untitled2

by ThreeFourSix

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Oct 2002 · Edited 27 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

a lust for all, is a must for some, and when lust is must, the trust is none.

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[2] deleted user 27-Oct-02/6:07 PM Reply
nice observation
[2] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/6:55 PM Reply
not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.
[n/a] ThreeFourSix › -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/7:50 PM Reply
i kinda wanted "some" and "none" to rhyme, which they do. but yeah its just a silly poem.

thanks for your feedback!
[6] Quarton 4-Jan-03/8:19 AM Reply
Short and sweet. Kind of like something Ogden Nash would write.
If you haven't read him, check it out.