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by logun2002ya

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Oct 2002 · 7 comments

getn high watchn time tick by as my soul goes back in time red wine from your lips eye'll drink as a memory of you eye ponder eye think to potent for me eye am drunk again off the wine of your love damn this must be a sin...

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[9] Katie 28-Oct-02/10:46 AM Reply

hm...logun...I like...it's slow yet easy...but I like it...simple yet interesting...9 for ya ^._.^

[n/a] logun2002ya › Katie 29-Oct-02/5:10 PM Reply

thank you...eye have a lot more but eye can only put up three...eye usually just get assholes replying with comments like "you suck eye is spelt I not e y e...even a looser knows that"...owell...gotta take the good with the bad...

[0] limonade 29-Oct-02/9:37 PM Reply

u suck but not cuz u spelt i wrong. u suck cuz this poem is s-h-i-t-e.

[n/a] logun2002ya › limonade 30-Oct-02/4:26 PM Reply

while your days are filled with mocking the spade, mine are filled with capturing the shade...the color of light, from the glimpse of a site, you will never see...for you curse yourself, when you try and curse me...

[0] limonade › logun2002ya 30-Oct-02/6:50 PM Reply

aww... kyoot.

[n/a] Limness 1-Jan-03/10:34 PM Reply

eye think you're wright

[6] Bachus 2-Jan-03/6:54 PM Reply

no.actually..that's perfectly natural.