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Haiku № 22965

The Black Hearted Sunflower

by anitawit

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Oct 2002 · 7 comments

The black- hearted sunflower Is kin to the sun Even though it carries about Darkness in its heart

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7 comments

[7] INTRANSIT 29-Oct-02/2:38 AM Reply
Not quite a haiku but excellent content.
[n/a] anitawit › INTRANSIT 10-Nov-02/9:52 PM Reply
Thanks (I wanted to say this before, I'm late). I've learnt since what a haiku is technically.
[0] Tascobar 29-Oct-02/8:44 AM Reply
Sorry, I'm a purist. Not a bad poem in itself, but an abhorrent haiku. Have a 0 and learn to OBEY THE RULES!!!!!!!
[0] Tintagiles 29-Oct-02/9:08 AM Reply
Though I can be a pedantic purist, in this case, I simply don't find it a very good poem, haiku or not.
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 29-Oct-02/4:39 PM Reply
I thought you said "tartness in its fart". i appologies.t
[10] -=SeTTle=- 29-Oct-02/10:25 PM Reply
Please excuse Tascobar's comment. He is a robot we built to selflessly suck cocks but somehow he became self-aware.
[6] Robert K Foster 10-Jun-03/9:30 AM Reply
great concept, but redundant. you essentially say the same thing twice.