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Free verse № 23037

betsy's hands

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

If she came cloaked in darkness, moonlight washing only her hands, . these fingers grow like stalks swaying from a solid trunk sprouting from a base where children jumped ship and hid from monsters. . Find them curled in rage waiting to explode not on face, but on mounds of clay and spinning liquid string glass from shape shifting dreams. . Clasped like prayer without words, betsy's hands fold for keeping angels warm, asleep on her palms.

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[7] Christof 30-Oct-02/1:35 AM Reply
Evocative, especially the stuff about clay and glass.
[10] Bachus 12-Jan-03/1:30 PM Reply
i have a rule against the word angel in poetry, but this is a masterful piece..have a 10.