All Alone

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

All alone By myself Staring at your picture Upon the shelf Wishing we Weren't apart Holding you close to me Sans broken heart But alas In my heart I know we are destined To be apart

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[6] Nicholas Jones 1-Nov-02/1:26 AM Reply

There's a nice sense of inevitability, but I'm not sure if the simplicity of the verse structure works here.