poemranker ::Something Must Be by Birdman42s

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Free verse № 23473

Something Must Be

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Something Must Be Something must be wrong with me with all this hurt inside, always bursting with anger, and never any pride. Something must be wrong with me if all I do is cry, I can't stop this pain all I want to do is die. Something must be wrong with me if my emotions run wild, all this confusion does is make me feel like a lost child. Something must be wrong with me with all these terrible things, always there and never gone depression is what it brings. Something must be wrong with me if I can't stop these thoughts, all this pain does is turn my stomach in knots. Something is truly wrong with me when I think there's only one way out, by letting this pain end only I can decide when

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4 comments

[4] limonade 3-Nov-02/12:05 AM Reply
Add an inspiring ending and submit this to the next "Chicken Soup for the Soul".
[10] deleted user 3-Nov-02/7:07 AM Reply
Very expressive, I respect that.
[10] vulcan 3-Nov-02/7:47 AM Reply
yes something must be I knew.nice
[1] <~> 4-Nov-02/11:27 AM Reply
again, seek the aid of a qualified dispenser of pharmaceuticals...