poemranker ::IM DANCING LIKE WIND by Prince of Void

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Free verse № 23700

IM DANCING LIKE WIND

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

Im dancing like wind Im living in future fear of emptieness I have a faith in fame of happienesss the flying of brid above ruin truth in madding hands It'e tears and fears of tomorrow's names I smiling when each season comes and wake lost senses of peace Agonizing shadows of poeple walking aimlessly It goes on day after day It ends in death of FORGEFUL path OF GRAVEYARD very simply

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[2] snacktime 4-Nov-02/5:44 PM Reply
erm ... I would edit the spelling
[0] Tintagiles › snacktime 5-Nov-02/12:04 PM Reply
I don't think that would help, somehow.