poemranker ::Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony

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Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

#2a sugar sweet sixteen olde english on balmy nights the taste of summer #2b approaching thirty the olde english turns my cheek and my fragile guts

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[8] UnityMitford 5-Nov-02/11:46 AM Reply
i say once you hit 30, you're too old to drink that shit and should move on to scotch. sounds like your stomach's telling you the same thing. nice. 8
[4] Tintagiles › UnityMitford 5-Nov-02/12:23 PM Reply
You ought to start on Scotch and stick to it.
[7] Robert K Foster 12-Jun-03/5:18 AM Reply
isn't Olde English a leather treatment or furniture polish?
[n/a] cacophony › Robert K Foster 13-Jun-03/11:43 AM Reply
ah... now that explains my aching belly and the wierd shine in the bottom of my loo!