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Free verse № 24828

more than i bargained for

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

finite bright finish pound drown diminish sound out deliberately sow slow compassionately but where is the emotion? bought blight done fought fight won are we having fun? forged, gorged, and roar armchair, blanket, snore sundays i'm ignored unless i block the score what am i, your whore?

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[8] INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/7:12 PM Reply
Fast and furious. good stuff, maynard.