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Free verse № 25413

my bed

by teacup

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

my bed used to not be empty. it used to be warm and inviting. it used to hold the one I love. my bed now is not quite empty. but very much not inviting, it is now the home of a bug, someone kill it please.

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[10] razorgrin 17-Nov-02/6:17 PM Reply
squash. now some bug has an empty bed because his love is gone.
[6] Bachus 17-Nov-02/9:31 PM Reply
the last line ruined it for me, but i was almost there. sorry. 6.