poemranker ::Missing You by psychedelic

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Haiku № 26245

Missing You

by psychedelic

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

The night sighs your name The day echoes your laughter Feelings avalanche.

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4 comments

[9] Caducus 22-Nov-02/5:35 AM Reply
This is beautiful, and the last line is perfection.
[n/a] psychedelic › Caducus 24-Nov-02/1:23 AM Reply
thanks :o)
[8] LovingWhispers 26-Nov-02/10:49 PM Reply
This is awesome....I write pretty long poems.....but I have never found such feeling,felt such sadness in so few words....Wonderful!!!
[6] hipster flare 13-Mar-03/9:28 AM Reply
get rid of addressing the reader as "you", and escape from the ordinary in line 2.