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Free verse № 2659

Gong

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Jun 2002 · 2 comments

Let it be known. Let it be known. Let the children understand the end of innocence. Let the garden run wild, summer is not coming. Let me watch from the tower, they draw near. Let us watch from the tower, time is leaking away. Let it be known. Let it be known. Let it be heard, but the gong wakes none. The moon has no tears to cry, for her fallen brother.

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[8] god'swife 22-Aug-02/12:04 AM Reply
I'm sure i don't understand this but i like it just the same 8/10
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite 15-Jan-05/7:24 PM Reply
excellent
-mega