poemranker ::Shipwrecked... by LovingWhispers

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Free verse № 27183

Shipwrecked...

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

Held captive in the caverns Of the darkness that surrounds Like a shadow raged and hungered For love of self,not found Sands of time fall endlessly Slipping through these hands Held but for a moments grace Then gone from where I stand Carried on a passing breeze Scattered across the sea To fall and sink so far beneath Waters blue,then back to me Rolling in on tides of tears Crashing on the shore A part of me,the discarded piece Shipwrecked here once more Ever searching for completeness Wandering, as though asleep Praying down upon my knees For a love that I may keep Lonely beachtown,sandy shores Hear my soft spoken plea Caress the depths of my soul Deliver acceptance here to me

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2 comments

[5] New Life Drug 26-Nov-02/4:05 PM Reply
goooood
[8] <~> 26-Nov-02/8:31 PM Reply
appealing in its barreness. but un new. so? an 8 because i am a sucker for a love poem, even if it feels like self help. you watch oprah, dontcha?