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Journey

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Dec 2002 · 0 comments

Laying down on the sands of my mental oasis Looking up to the diamonds in the sky Thoughts of the past haunt my mind But with every breath exhaled New Found peace and love is unveiled The journey through my mind has begun Thoughts fly by my head thoughts so poignant They weigh of lead steadfast on getting somewhere

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