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Free verse № 28754

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by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Dec 2002 · 8 comments

there's a lady that knows all that flys is old. its a dance of the macabre a dance of the timbre a dance of the unemployed. psyche 1 psyche 2 what do you know? sesame street. we scream we dream yes, we do.

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[8] Caducus 6-Dec-02/5:51 AM Reply

This is quite a hopeful ending to the isolation of unemployment, it appeased me, dark mixed with light nicely here -8-

[n/a] poetandknowit 6-Dec-02/8:47 AM Reply

Do you ever write anything yourself or have you simply developed a keen ability to cut and paste.

[8] Caducus › poetandknowit 6-Dec-02/9:56 AM Reply

I do write myself, all my stuff is on 'word' or on poetry.com, and because i dont have a computer at home i do it at work risking the sack, if you wish to challenge my authenticity PK fine I'm more than up to it. Also a lot of my writing is personal and unless I have a doppelganger on the loose then yes I write my own work.
Bit spiky today are we ?

[n/a] <~> › Caducus 6-Dec-02/10:54 AM Reply

he wasn't talking to you, unless you are athena.

[n/a] <~> › poetandknowit 6-Dec-02/10:55 AM Reply

who wrote this one, p&k? hatter? i looked but can't find-- looks like lines from a few sources sewn together to me.

[n/a] ecargo › <~> 6-Dec-02/12:35 PM Reply

Led Zeppelin should get *some* credit for (at least inspiring) the first two lines; other than that, it's anyone's guess.

[7] Bachus 6-Dec-02/11:36 AM Reply

i would of ended at sesame street.@

[8] Caducus 7-Dec-02/5:20 AM Reply

sorry Pk / ZZinnia my mistake