poemranker ::a light in your eyes by crin

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Free verse № 28766

a light in your eyes

Member since 2001 · Posted 6 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

turn the screw a little tighter drive the idea home a firefly at play inside your skull lighting up the surface so dimly pushing against the darkness sliding against the resistance a soft glow so pretty in the recesses dancing through your eyes like the devil exploding from heaven a universal equation fitting all the pieces together

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[n/a] <~> 6-Dec-02/10:58 AM Reply
nice.