Untitled

by ==Doylum

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Dec 2002 · Edited 9 Dec 2002 · 8 comments

You may have wings sir! But i have a mighty sword Are your veins as blue?

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[n/a] Bill Z Bub 9-Dec-02/9:12 AM Reply

Firstly, all poems should have titles. A child without a name must not be loved. Secondly, a Haiku NEEDS a title. Without a title, these haikus are meaningless to me.
Alas.

[n/a] ==Doylum › Bill Z Bub 9-Dec-02/12:32 PM Reply

first of all, yeah? thanks for the tip! What should i call it? Secondly, yeah? thanks for the tip! what should i call it?
or alternatively
Firstly - arse
secondly - burger
Oh I see another knave, well they would be meaningless if you have no title
Anass

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › ==Doylum 9-Dec-02/6:18 PM Reply

Okay, okay, I guess I came on way too strong. Untitled poems are just a pet peeve of mine. As for the haikus, I just meant that I have no idea what they are about, and maybe a title would help. Peace?

[7] <~> › Bill Z Bub 9-Dec-02/8:55 PM Reply

traditionally, haikus are untitled.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › <~> 9-Dec-02/9:01 PM Reply

I wasn't sure about that one, but I think you're right. Still, the word "untitled" is still a title. On this site, anyway. It's just a crappy, common title.
And it's been a while since I've seen a traditional haiku here.
Like I said, it has become a pet peeve of mine.

[n/a] ==Doylum › Bill Z Bub 10-Dec-02/2:26 PM Reply

oh my god christ! You poor poor boy
just a modicum sir just a modicum

[n/a] ==Doylum › Bill Z Bub 10-Dec-02/2:55 PM Reply

Came on to strong? Came on to strong? You came on, my dear, like Sir Geoffrey Howe in his vest and grots. Be savage doll face.

[5] Robert K Foster 23-May-03/11:25 AM Reply

strangely sexual.