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The yellow rose of California

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Dec 2002 · 7 comments

I have heard of a rose, although I have never seen this flower. Bright yellow with petals tipped orange. It is said to be found amongst other flowers and grasses and dandelions. Its' large blossom is supported by a sturdy green stem with blood red thorns that some fear but I would not. Its leaves are well taken care of. But I have also heard that this rose has a certain affliction. That every time the sun passes over, it reaches straining and earnest for the warmth. The sun cannot pass any closer than its' fixed position. And yet, this rose still leans. My fear is, she may lean too far and uproot herself and die.

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[8] David 10-Dec-02/9:22 AM Reply
I like your poem.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › David 10-Dec-02/9:31 AM Reply
Thank you.
[7] lunar 10-Dec-02/2:02 PM Reply
you are a lot more peotry literate than me. yr poems sound like they are meant to be poems unlike mine which are just random thoughts
[n/a] INTRANSIT › lunar 10-Dec-02/5:23 PM Reply
thank you. everyone has to start somewhere. quitting would be the worst you could do. I would know. I did it twice.
[9] god'swife › INTRANSIT 10-Dec-02/5:31 PM Reply
I love you Intransit, because your so gullible. Will you marry me??
[n/a] INTRANSIT › god'swife 10-Dec-02/5:34 PM Reply
well, uh, gee, um, well, no, because, damn.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › INTRANSIT 10-Dec-02/5:36 PM Reply
Does that mean you and P&K are one in the same? I'm really lost , I guess.