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Haiku № 29552

Haiku

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Dec 2002 · 10 comments

Seventy degrees Reservior reflects starlight Fish hours equal human

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[8] Bachus 10-Dec-02/8:07 PM Reply
i caught an eighteen lb striper last spring..i thought it was a shark. no shit.
[n/a] <~> 11-Dec-02/7:08 AM Reply
not sure iunderstand the last line...
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 11-Dec-02/7:29 AM Reply
I was thinking about if fish tell time the way humans can by starlight or sunlight.
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 11-Dec-02/8:00 AM Reply
i'm not sure that comes through.
maybe you should pose it as a question:
do fish clocks have hands?
not that that conveys the meaning any more clearly...but it amuses me.
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 11-Dec-02/8:01 AM Reply
maybe this is too much to be questioned in a haiku. maybe not. maybe yes.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 11-Dec-02/5:20 PM Reply
that's what I was kind of thinking, too much stuff. Am I anywhere near a true haiku? I need to check because no sense in trying an I/P if I haven't gotten a simple haiku right. right?
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 11-Dec-02/5:22 PM Reply
completely different animals.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 11-Dec-02/5:36 PM Reply
ok, I can accept that. stiiiilll, am i even in the ballpark?
[8] Amelia 11-Dec-02/10:24 AM Reply
Nice haiku.
Did you miss me?
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Amelia 11-Dec-02/5:17 PM Reply
absofrigginlutely! Whydya leave? Glad you're back. You are back,
aren't you?