poemranker ::Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus

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Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning".

by Bachus

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Dec 2002 · Edited 11 Dec 2002 · 32 comments

From insects to jets. their dinosaur robots are more than meets your eye.

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[5] <~> 11-Dec-02/7:55 PM Reply
hoad up yo. is it a dinosaur, or an insect? cause weren't dinosaurs notoriously ornithopods?
[n/a] Bachus › <~> 11-Dec-02/7:59 PM Reply
all of thee above, scientifically speaking you're right, but in the world of toys i'm golden.i
[5] <~> › Bachus 11-Dec-02/8:15 PM Reply
damn you!
[0] poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/9:07 PM Reply
I suppose we need a proper form to let our past turn into nostalgia. I guess this rates up there with trying to sell T-shirts with a Tide box on it. Go figure.
[n/a] Bachus › poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/9:39 PM Reply
the sad thing is you'll never have a poem on the worst list. you're too good. and tall and stuff.w
[0] poetandknowit › Bachus 11-Dec-02/9:46 PM Reply
I suppose not, although my most well loved poem has some 25 zeros, which would qualify for the worst. And I am more than a foot taller than your friend (sis), but that would barely make me a point guard in a pick up game.
[n/a] god'swife › poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/11:43 PM Reply
but when were living half underwater, I'll use up less air than you.
[0] poetandknowit › god'swife 11-Dec-02/11:45 PM Reply
I live 5280 feet above sea level. I do not have to worry about living underwater at this point.
[n/a] god'swife › poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/11:51 PM Reply
I can hold my breath for 2 minutes. I can make an 80 last an hour and a half at 2atms.
[0] poetandknowit › god'swife 11-Dec-02/11:59 PM Reply
Why hold your breath. Just give in. Don't fear the reaper. I have no idea what you mean by the second comment. Did they spike the refreshments at the boy's sing-a-ling?
[n/a] god'swife › poetandknowit 12-Dec-02/12:13 AM Reply
80cc's of air at between 33 and 66 ft. of salt water. I hold my breath because i'm a romantic; always expecting some happy ending. We had champagne and cake to celebrate. The flutes played Tchaikovsky's dance.
[0] poetandknowit › god'swife 12-Dec-02/12:15 AM Reply
I am an idealist, thus I would just let the water love me. Celebrate what? The Nutcracker? Was he Little Clara?
[n/a] god'swife › poetandknowit 12-Dec-02/12:22 AM Reply
Rat King, of course.
[n/a] horus8 › god'swife 12-Dec-02/12:54 AM Reply
james clavell. sho gun.
[n/a] Bachus › god'swife 12-Dec-02/1:08 AM Reply
could you possibly quit turning my precious "poemes" into a dating service lest i cut you from my will of soon to be-ee-eing-ness-ess? that's that written passages of arte where i shower ye with copper, piss, and prudence....swine. "it's just another day...life in the ground..listening to the ground..it doesn't make a sound...there's a smile on my face for everyone...it's just another dayee...it's just another day OHHHHHHHAAAAAAHHHHHHH! OHHH EEEE AH AH AYE AYE EY. ah ah aaaa.. just another..."
[0] poetandknowit › Bachus 12-Dec-02/1:13 AM Reply
It is practice for you soap opera career. How important. They will soon pour cement in you honor.
[n/a] Bachus › poetandknowit 12-Dec-02/2:09 AM Reply
actually, it's oingo boingo in my headphones, there are no re-runs in soap operas..
[n/a] god'swife › Bachus 12-Dec-02/1:16 AM Reply
You think you deserve a trust fund just because you want one. Sure you talk the talk when you need to. I fear the whole world is sarting to believe you, don't forget I'm on your side. Be glad I'm on your side. I guess on nights like this you know who your friends are. I'm going to bed. Stop trying so hard. You're the best there is.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › god'swife 12-Dec-02/1:53 PM Reply
a trust fund at this point? impossible. i'm no blue blood, but i could hoarde a bunch of cash together for the duration of my life thean create a trust fund for others..you know deformed children, deaf guatamaleans andblind ethiopians the usuall..you know build a park a library..the usual jive. i am negative by the way. YAY!n
[0] poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/9:55 PM Reply
Did you change the title or am I drunk. Now it makes even less sense. Was that the point?
[n/a] Bachus › poetandknowit 11-Dec-02/10:36 PM Reply
i changed the innard workings and the title of the poem to be more universal instead of all about my scrocking stuffels.g
[n/a] Bachus › poetandknowit 12-Dec-02/5:18 PM Reply
the evolution of organisms and technology.?
[9] INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/4:08 PM Reply
and when they bump us off,who'll be around to buy all that electronic stuff.
[n/a] Bachus › INTRANSIT 12-Dec-02/5:16 PM Reply
i don't know? perhaps bigfoot and mermaids?
[n/a] Caducus 13-Dec-02/6:24 AM Reply
Transformer Smurf ? just a disturbing idea
[n/a] Bachus › Caducus 13-Dec-02/3:02 PM Reply
interesting...what might he turn into? a faiery mound or a clear running brook. yes, disturbing indeed.
[10] razorgrin 13-Dec-02/11:28 AM Reply
this poem is my new jesus. the transformers totally ROCKED! The 80's ones, not the new stuff.10!
[n/a] Bachus › razorgrin 13-Dec-02/3:05 PM Reply
i agree...i liked the decepticons so much cooler of a name than the autobots, also the cartoons theme song, harder to quit hummimg than the a-teams, or the smurfs..i hate good jingles, they're like herpes...relentless.
[n/a] RGallet › Bachus 7-Jan-03/2:17 PM Reply
Remember the 80s??? I Do. LOL! Asl? I heard the strokes have a new record!!
[n/a] Bachus › RGallet 7-Jan-03/7:34 PM Reply
lol. asl? i don't listen to the strokes.s
[8] hipster flare 16-May-03/5:26 AM Reply
nice toy theme, an excellent sense of playfulness
[n/a] Shardik › hipster flare 16-May-03/11:33 AM Reply
Thanks, I also wanted it to metaphorically bridge the evolution of inventions, war, and biology with toys.