poemranker ::Like Heraldo's Vault? by pessa

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Free verse № 30088

Like Heraldo's Vault?

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

sometimes it's good to test oneself, undress oneself from the run of routine trappings. you've been the surgeon scapel in hand, removing the strands of my societal placed, plasticized wrappings. I stand somewhat still with some unease, and sensitivity pleas as you dissect each layer with care. in your humanistic search locating the core delving for more I hopefully wondered, is anything there?

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 14-Dec-02/12:53 PM Reply
is it scalpel?