poemranker ::pledging allegiance by moonUnit

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Free verse № 30765

pledging allegiance

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Dec 2002 · 2 comments

now more than ever, united we sit. -thousands of people killed today: don't worry, no americans harmed- we believe above all else in our right to exist and to decide the existence of others our enemy; unbearably human. we refuse to understand anything but our own superiority denounce coke, or even god but there are names for people who don't plaster our flag over every available surface. we are infinitely unabashedly grotesquely increasingly a nation of the free, the greasy, the selfish. so many heroes lost: oh arrogance, oh waste and gluttony. god bless our s.u.v.s

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[9] blkarak 18-Dec-02/7:08 AM Reply
Damn right, sister!!-9
[2] slapmeonthepatio 6-Feb-04/7:40 PM Reply
profound. And by profound I mean dull. DULL DULL DULL.