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Free verse № 30880

Leap

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

There she is again. I can see her as plain as day. Does she see me? Hmm, she almost walked right through me. If I only was in that dimension, it could be like that moment all the time. But, then, the anxiety, the uncertainty. She could come here if she would only look harder, to see the other streams. I should not try, even to pull her to my world. Imagine the pain it would cause us both. We might as well be three thousand miles apart. Still her smile can cut through the currents that separate us. I won't forget the day we met briefly. Will she?

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[6] Caducus 19-Dec-02/6:47 AM Reply
Haunting/quite touching, An inconclusive ghost story 'tim burtonesque' in style