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Free verse № 31073

Chalk

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

i was standing at the front of the class one day, "write on the board." my teacher said. i picked up the chalk, and began to talk, and would write what came to my head. "123, ABC" i wrote, under pressure, trying not to choke... cause when I turned around, to speak to my crowd, my teacher said "What is this, some kind of joke?" i reversed my last motion, standing dazed and confused, i yelled "This was not my intention!" i looked at the chalk, as it began to talk, saying "face it, you're gonna get some detention!" "Mr. Adams is Stupid!" is all that was there, in plain sight, for all to see. i picked up the eraser, to delete this foul mark, when chalk stated "Don't bother, he's working with me!"

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3 comments

[5] Bill Z Bub 19-Dec-02/8:23 PM Reply
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
[8] deleted user 24-Dec-02/6:30 PM Reply
a good laugh, yet possible that a real "poem" lies within... continued work is highly recommended...
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Dec-02/6:41 PM Reply
that picture on your website is priceless just hilarious. for the love of god, the nubs, the masks, the beauty. Also the heinieken shot wasn't bad either. lol. also your poem left a bit confused, and i find that odd. some nice rhymes though..