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THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER

by LETO

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Dec 2002 · 4 comments

WOULD YOU WISH TO BE AN ALL IMMORTAL TREE FOREVER TO SWAY IN THE WIND AND DRINK FROM THE SKY THO NEVER TO GROW OLD AND DIE

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4 comments

[5] Bachus 19-Dec-02/4:13 PM Reply
unicorn blood and strudels. no!
[n/a] Bill Z Bub 19-Dec-02/7:38 PM Reply
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
[n/a] Caducus 20-Dec-02/5:26 AM Reply
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-
[n/a] Caducus 20-Dec-02/5:26 AM Reply
Like a methsulah, if i could be a tree it would be a palm tree on a nudist beach. This was simple, aeroplane poetry but i liked it a lot. -7-