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Haiku № 31139

pee haiku

by New Life Drug

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Dec 2002 · Edited 19 Dec 2002 · 9 comments

Pee, I must piss now here I go! to the toilet! ahh- relief- oh yes

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9 comments

[n/a] Bill Z Bub 19-Dec-02/7:50 PM Reply
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.

IMHO
[0] poetandknowit 19-Dec-02/9:03 PM Reply
Utter stupidity. do you really think we give a shit about your urinary tract. Come on show some depth.
[n/a] New Life Drug › poetandknowit 20-Dec-02/4:23 PM Reply
depth. I'm tired of depth. You probably don't give a shit about my urinary tract, but it could be anyone's urinary tract. I think haikus were meant to be different. If anyone disagrees, who cares. I like it.
[0] Ranger 20-Dec-02/4:26 AM Reply
Bugger, I'm agreeing with poetandknowit! This is incredible, thank you NLD!
[1] wOrnella Mutiw 21-Dec-02/1:33 AM Reply
Pissing....when you really have to go can be somewhat of an orgasmic experience...your haiku on the other hand is not!
[n/a] New Life Drug › wOrnella Mutiw 21-Dec-02/4:33 PM Reply
and why isn't it? Not all haikus are orgasmic. If you look upon poetry for pleasure, please don't read mine you spaz!
[1] wOrnella Mutiw 21-Dec-02/4:45 PM Reply
Wal Mart is running a sale on adult diapers...HUGGIES
[n/a] New Life Drug › wOrnella Mutiw 24-Dec-02/2:27 PM Reply
umm ok... and why exactly are you telling me this?
[1] Poetsettle 14-May-03/5:37 AM Reply
Seems the form of traditional Haiku, yet the first line denotes no season.