poemranker ::One by adrenalize

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Free verse № 31327

One

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Dec 2002 · 8 comments

One God And yet we fight over who is closer to Him Forgetting He Bestows His Mercy and Blessings on all And He Alone is the judge of right and wrong One father, one mother But we prefer divisions Race, religion, ethnicity and so on Not realizing this road leads nowhere One earth, one sky Even then we create Our Holy Lands Do we not live under the same sky Are we not going to return to the same earth One life To learn, love, hope, laugh and cry Instead of ignorance, hate, despondency, destruction and lies We are all going to die, but lets give life a try

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[4] wOrnella Mutiw 21-Dec-02/5:02 PM Reply
i feel like i'm watchin the inspirational network....please...get real...care for a piece of baklava?
[n/a] adrenalize › wOrnella Mutiw 22-Dec-02/11:25 AM Reply
First of all nice name......think there was an Italian actress who happened to have that name too....Secondly....I got sick of all the bs in the media these days and consequently I wrote the poem cos mayb if we tried getting along with other ppl it'd b better than all the fighting crap and thirdly i don't give a shit about ur reality cos REALITY SUCKS
[4] wOrnella Mutiw 21-Dec-02/5:02 PM Reply
i feel like i'm watching the inspirational network....please...get real...care for a piece of baklava?
[4] <~> 21-Dec-02/9:53 PM Reply
yeah. good idea. make love not war. why can't we all just get along? buck up, little camper, every cloud has a silver lining. here, have one point for each unoriginal stanza.
[n/a] adrenalize › <~> 22-Dec-02/11:27 AM Reply
thanks for the points but considering they're from a high school brat I guess its not surprising.......lol
[n/a] INTRANSIT › adrenalize 22-Dec-02/3:41 PM Reply
check " of people and places". A plain write no doubt, otherwise
,I'm witcha.
[5] aliena 22-Dec-02/9:12 AM Reply
good sentiment,amen
[0] Tintagiles 14-Jan-03/7:37 PM Reply
Oh shut up.