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The Day the Winter Muse Fighters of the World Came By

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Dec 2002 · Edited 25 Dec 2002 · 4 comments

Dammit! They got my blue peter badge. Dammit. I'd have asked them to stay for cocktails at the pool, but they swooped in like a metaphor and swiped my credentials. Cleaned me out, and left me bereft in endless summer. Nothing to do but surf. Or act like I'm surfing. Damn. Now, if only I could remember if I dropped the soap or the soap dropped me? No, wait, the soap scooped me up! What the fuck do I want with the damn WMFW any way? "Just sign here." Fuck. They can keep my blue peter. I hear they know what to do with it. Just call me lucky, and go frame a diploma or something. I gotta take a call.

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[9] horus8 25-Dec-02/10:14 PM Reply

cheers. i can't give it a ten because of the sensitive nature of it 'all', but precise writing.e

[8] Christof 30-Dec-02/3:47 AM Reply

This is crazed and funny. I don't know what a Winter Muse Fighter might look like, but they sound sneaky and unreliable.

[7] Bill Z Bub 1-Jan-03/7:21 PM Reply

I think the soap dropped me on my head as a child.
Not sure I understand whats going on here, but was very amused. 8

[n/a] <~> › Bill Z Bub 1-Jan-03/7:23 PM Reply

this is for horus/he has been known to act on soap. slippery business, that.