poemranker ::The Heart Of It by raysaun

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Free verse № 3271

The Heart Of It

by raysaun

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

Deep, dark, rich brown soil; fertile, waiting, responsive. Seeds dropped randomly with caring hands, with loving heart and eyes that see the beauty that God???s own earth can hold. Birds and insects, butterflies and bees, all contribute to create such art: leaf to mould to mulch and then it all becomes rich dark soil again.

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[4] deleted user 15-Jul-02/9:33 AM Reply
Like this one because of the caring hands; don't like the birds and insects, butterflies and bees. Could be good.
[9] Holden 23-Jul-02/11:02 AM Reply
Very Metaphoric and Inspired.