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Free verse № 34613

dumb ho

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

She played with my heart threw it like a dart. she broke it in two i didnt have any glue. she fed me a lie i ate the whole pie. when she looked in my eye i wanted to die. she told me that I didnt have to try, that she was all mine. It felt so good inside. wanted to beleave her never wanted to leave her. but shes a deceiver holding a cleaver. with the look of death, she took my breath.

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3 comments

[n/a] horus8 8-Jan-03/10:17 AM Reply
is this your depilatory?
[7] RGallet 8-Jan-03/11:30 AM Reply
You're an e short of the respect of poets worldwide. Liked it though. 7
[8] ChunkyHunkyMonkey 8-Jan-03/4:07 PM Reply
dont worry i have been there b4 too and its painful but hey they alwayz come back to tell you dat it was a mistake and thzt they regret it