poemranker ::lost by sir_heff

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Free verse № 34616

lost

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

I'm drownding in fears, and losing my steer. Just wanna lose myself in a feild of beer. when i come to I'll be thinking of you and the things you do, wile i start to speuw i feel like a prick My head is real thick according to you i think with my dick.

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[3] scitz 9-Jan-03/4:41 AM Reply
Just read your other one which was brilliant this is not it shames your talent (3)