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Free verse № 3479

Their Eyes

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2002 · Edited 9 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

I can only imagine How one can feel in love I see the look in one's eyes When they can only see one. I've never had the privilege Of a restricted field of vision. I only dream what mysteries it could hold.

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[7] Angel_of_fait 9-Jul-02/12:48 AM Reply
pretty good you headed in a good direction but ended up short angel_of_fait
[7] horus8 15-Jul-02/12:03 AM Reply
It can be a bit overated. "find yourself and it will find you". I'm sorry, that sounded ridiculously pompous. Like something my fucking drunk Uncle would say. Forgive me . Maybe try traveling?
[6] Shardik 10-Oct-03/5:46 PM Reply
Wow, that's an original thought.