poemranker ::fade in by inka

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Free verse № 34996

fade in

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

colors fade the backround exists in dreams in real life called fantasy flowers wither and angels die the world the world in black and white people die and lose thier pride sugar melts majority lets evil rise serenity no longer exists mists of instability build to dense fogs of hopelessness will you be my sunshine take away the pain let me see the colors and the good lost in the rain let me fall asleep with you and life will start again in your arms i fall asleep and i can breathe again

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[7] Caducus 10-Jan-03/2:38 AM Reply
Pretty Good -7-
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 10-Jan-03/7:48 PM Reply
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
[10] DarkThirteens 24-Feb-04/8:02 PM Reply
This is exelent! Definately work you should be proud of.