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Free verse № 35809

Thorns of Grace

by smlink84

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Jan 2003 · 5 comments

As I lay for a time, I saw the truth of mine The worldly wealth of a second comming, Only to rule out My soul for eternal being. Misery invites me For a walk in the thorns, And right beside me Are the vanquished souls Whom have vanished In the abyss of self-pity. I have been tempted I have given in, But he who suffered Gives me grace. For here I stand Only on his land And may he recieve Glory Through one, not worthy.

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5 comments

[8] Caducus 14-Jan-03/1:57 AM Reply
Liked the vibe in this ..8
Check line 3 as spelling error.
[n/a] smlink84 › Caducus 16-Jan-03/7:09 AM Reply
Thank You
[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 14-Jan-03/11:40 AM Reply
die! jesus freak and a good shabbas to you!
[6] Topaz Servias 21-Jan-03/7:29 PM Reply
okay, i get the gist, but it's just....umm...weird
[9] Freethinker1602 8-Mar-03/7:46 PM Reply
You seem to be a strong person. Some day we learn. Some day we yern. Yet we shall never accept what can be percieved as the only truth.