poemranker ::Lianne by mindsigns

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Lianne

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

Lianne... the flowers died today a soldier walks alone a smile lodestone Lianne... the pillow's on the floor there is nothing in the air the Diaster's under there it's a complicated thing to see putting faces on disease Come Home Lianne... the dim light between peace and war your story is not spoken the futile turmoil soaking Lianne... what a lovely page it was created in the evening absolute grieving it's a complicated thing to see putting faces on disease Lianne,come home....

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[8] <~> 16-Jan-03/9:04 AM Reply
damn. that is some kind of keening.
kudos, mindsigns
[n/a] mindsigns › <~> 18-Jan-03/6:46 AM Reply
Thanks, I appreciate it