ocean mistake

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

i die symbollically, figurativlly, and literally the blue glass shattered against the wall into the cracks with the peace that i need so despretly in me fingers grinding, so bloody in the wall, the darkness of the never ending fight its gaining, im loosing; this never ending scream it only hits my ears. be happy. but i like this never ending tragic night.

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[5] Bachus 19-Jan-03/9:31 PM Reply

To prove i am here for the poetry. only.

Des, in all honesty, you're much better at spending money then writing poetry, but i'm sure you knew that, and it's no water of your back.

Even Muti's poetry is scorching better than this husk exoskeletoned denial.

I could edit it for you.
that is if you'd like.