poemranker ::Take My Hand by milkymilk

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Free verse № 37069

Take My Hand

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

When your soft hands brushes mine the sensation, the feeling, its oh so fine a thousand emotions I feel from the first touch Jovialness, excitement, sensations of much How is that, our hands always find each other How is that, the seat you pick, we're always together I can't say we're destined or we met by chance this bond we share pierces the world like a wall with a supernatural lance love is never perfect, so I can't say your perfect for me but come with me, together we can set ourselves free out of misery and this world's servitude and to combat people's hostile attitudes about us, nothing can stop us love is built with: devotion, heart, and trust you are so rare and truly I am grateful i love your inner beauty, it is the most beautiful as a mollusk's shell is ellaborate, winding curves, like beautiful ladders but the inside, the living, the most important, is all that matters please take my hand and join me on the journey we call life lets grow closer, until we are one, strong to combat strife

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[5] FreeFormFixation 26-Sep-03/11:31 AM Reply
very pretty. i like the mollusk simile.