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Free verse № 38533

the secret life of eyebrows

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jan 2003 · Edited 17 Aug 2003 · 7 comments

sometimes my arrogance astounds me frightens me frowns me there is no basis none at all there is no end to lost opportunity is it that look that I give like you're crazy like you're coming on like Heracles I tried to tame them but was entangled strangled neck crook angle cracked asphalt angel decked out summer phaedrus helio-fabulous manicure toppled gritting on toes and smokers grappled but I've lost all addictions save for this razor think this'll phase her?

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[10] horus8 30-Jan-03/1:20 AM Reply
how could i not ten this?
[10] Bachus 4-Jun-03/4:02 PM Reply
The best.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 17-Aug-03/6:55 PM Reply
I see you have found Jesus too.

http://www.subgenius.com/bigfist/pics6/legume3/legume3TN/_choosejesus.html

We are pretty sunbeams aren't we?
[10] Lifeboatman 17-Aug-03/8:06 PM Reply
10.. really good
[10] INTRANSIT 17-Aug-03/8:14 PM Reply
If there's a best poet (overall) award for this site, I'd vote for you. eyebrows, HA! whodathunk.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › INTRANSIT 17-Aug-03/8:36 PM Reply
Aww, thanks! Now I feel special. :))
[n/a] Bill Z Bub 21-Aug-03/7:36 PM Reply
What the hell? Am I on crack or something?