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Over beast

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Feb 2003 · 14 comments

Incandecent silence looms over the situation like silocone waste and life all over your face Cherish these moments because they hate you hate these moments because they make you take stock in overtalk-overchild live free be wild It might take your whole life to emulate that smile again... It might take your life whole in the end.

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14 comments

[4] horus8 3-Feb-03/1:56 PM Reply

It might take your whole life to learn how to spell silicone, idiot.

[n/a] Crakyamuni › horus8 23-Jun-03/9:53 AM Reply

I like your degenerate,illuminati approach, for every toilet bowl, my enemy, needs a roach.

[10] nolan 13-Feb-03/9:10 PM Reply

excellent stuff

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 16-Feb-03/11:59 AM Reply

Talent no doubt.

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 16-Feb-03/12:02 PM Reply

Fuck you're everywhere like my pubic hair. word. drow.

[5] baughworm 20-May-03/9:34 PM Reply

very young sounding

[n/a] Crakyamuni › baughworm 23-Jun-03/9:51 AM Reply

Thanks.

[10] RealmOfSong 12-Jun-03/1:18 PM Reply

I really like this poem, it makes tons of sense to me... And, let's look beyond the spelling of silicone...

[n/a] Crakyamuni › RealmOfSong 23-Jun-03/9:50 AM Reply

Thanks friend. I hope to one day learn the shape of words. A beautiful gesture to overlook my oversight. ANgst is often here overdone.

[5] DJCARTER 24-Jul-03/3:00 AM Reply

sounds like one on eminem's lost rap song....

[n/a] SP REYNOLDS 11-Aug-03/9:52 PM Reply

This poem made me cum.

[9] cuddlytiger17 4-Jan-05/6:24 PM Reply

Great! The first line lures you in. There's just something about this that's all-consuming. A life's lesson here summed up in a few lines.

[5] Edna Sweetlove 20-Aug-06/5:20 AM Reply

You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.

[n/a] Crakyamuni › Edna Sweetlove 20-Aug-06/4:36 PM Reply

Ok. Can you be my coach. I need a coach. A british coach with big words and an in depth view of the inner workings of Narnia or Harry Potter. Really.