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I Had

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

I had a glimmer But it died I had a truth But I lied I had a dream But it was traded away I had a hope But it wouldn't stay I had a chance But now I don't I used to try But now I won't And that's the end I have no more to say I guess I just had no idea It would all come out this way

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5 comments

[7] deleted user 4-Feb-03/2:58 PM Reply

nice rhyme >7 :)

[7] corinacorrie 6-Feb-03/3:11 PM Reply

Great poem! Maybe think about changing "and that's the end" since it doesn't need to rhyme, just a thought.

[8] horus8 16-Feb-03/7:38 PM Reply

Rancho Cucamunga.

[7] INTRANSIT 15-Jun-03/8:23 AM Reply

your not as bad off as you think. less is more.

[8] Sasha 19-May-04/7:37 PM Reply

not bad. -8-