Morning Rainbows

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Feb 2003 · 7 comments

Take a green pill for headaches A blue pill for spots Take a yellow pill for stomachaches And a red one for thoughts Take a purple pill for sight And a brown one for stealth Then an orange one for frights And enjoy your pretty rainbow of health

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[5] Nicholas Jones 6-Feb-03/7:12 AM Reply

After the first two lines, I expected some Sylvia Plath esque darkness was going to be there under the ironically placid surface. It never happened. Gutted.

[6] <~> 6-Feb-03/7:29 PM Reply

cynical. as it should be.

[6] deleted user 9-Feb-03/6:18 PM Reply

[7] horus8 14-Feb-03/10:14 AM Reply

This was so almost there... the last line tosses it though.

[8] Massokissed 2-Apr-03/10:49 PM Reply

Good job!. just dont OD :P

[8] Massokissed 2-Apr-03/10:50 PM Reply

Good job!. just dont OD :P

[9] INTRANSIT 15-Jun-03/8:16 AM Reply

I'm with squiggles. spot on.