poemranker ::breathe on me? by emilyowey

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Free verse № 39453

breathe on me?

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Feb 2003 · 4 comments

Will you breathe on me? Will you give some of that life that I long for? Could you share it? I see you stand so strong, so firm. I wish that that was in me. I lay here prostrate, on the floor, Trying to find some of you. Breathe on me. Look at me. Let me see your face. Your eyes could lift me, Hands could hold me. Please just look my way?

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4 comments

[8] Shardik 6-Feb-03/6:04 PM Reply
Grrrrrrr.
[5] <~> 6-Feb-03/6:40 PM Reply
i'm sorry, but this makes you look pathetic. have some self-respect, child!
[10] SMP 29-Oct-12/10:27 PM Reply
My fav on this site. I love it.
[10] SMP 29-Oct-12/10:28 PM Reply
My fav on this site. I love it.