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Driftwood

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

She drifts from me O'er oceans deep Now lost without a sail I cry to her Only to learn She does not hear my hail My darling love of Angels flame Will live forever more Not in me, nor by my side But on an unknown shore I gave you all Broke down the wall That held you back from joy And now you run What's done is done I'm no more than a toy My darling love of Angels flame Will live forever more Not in me, nor by my side But on an unknown shore I love you though 'spite what I know About that mask you wear I pray you die With a lucky guy Who's name you're proud to bare My darling love of Angels flame Will live forever more Not in me, nor by my side But on an unknown shore So now I'm all alone Doomed always to roam For love, new life, a home And one to call my own

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5 comments

[n/a] horus8 7-Feb-03/10:26 AM Reply

"I'm no more than a toy" I'm no more than your toy. This is a lyric, also, by the way. 8.

[n/a] Luv2write 12-Mar-03/3:37 AM Reply

I really really like this one. The rhyme scheme is different at the end so it draws your attention to it more. Well done once again.

[10] tadpole 4-Sep-03/4:09 PM Reply

oh man, I really like this one, I'll have to read more of yours

[10] AM I EVIL? 8-Sep-04/12:21 AM Reply

nice flow and good rhymes and good story

[n/a] zodiac 8-Sep-04/1:13 AM Reply

Would you agree that the song "Driftwood" by Travis is the most insidious and unnecessarily popular song ever?