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The Eye

by Enki

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Feb 2003 · 3 comments

The mask I wear is never seen. It hides the I which is obscene. It serves a purpose most oblique. The face it shows is rather bleak. Were I to show the inner I. The ego would be heard to cry. Were I to take off mask most dashing. The sound heard would be of teeth gnashing.

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[n/a] Mr Pig 12-Feb-03/8:23 AM Reply
Cant for the life of me underststand your point in this? -no vote
[7] Bachus 12-Feb-03/2:31 PM Reply
The elephant man, without oldman.
[7] richa 10-Jul-03/4:27 AM Reply
I wouldn't bother with the rhyme. This poem pretends to be profound then rhymes dashing and gnashing. It just seems a bit daft